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SalveYingLv102mthSalveYing

God, it's horrible. It's like two hours of poetry from a self-deprecating teenager. I understand that he's a teenager, and I get that he's in Severus's body, but please, kill me. I can summarize the story as: "I am Severus, I am horrible for hurting my Lily. Why don't you love me? My heart is with you forever, but I will never be with you, and that makes my heart not beat." It's like a marathon of secondhand embarrassment. I like drama, but not so poorly done. I don't know if that changes in the future; I hope it does. Good luck to anyone brave enough to read it.

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Replies9

AnotokiLv11Anotoki

Lol, surely it's not that bad

2mth

BoundaryWalkerLv2BoundaryWalker

was it that bad?

Anotoki:Lol, surely it's not that bad

2mth

TheSonOfGodLv1TheSonOfGod

Nah, he changed tunes about 18 in, so I have hopes

BoundaryWalker:was it that bad?

2mth

CewuLv14Cewu

it is wayyy to theatrical it is not even that much drama... like the amount of drama is minimal... but the little drama that is there gets sttetched into 100 paragraphs

2mth

The_cowLv13The_cow

hard to read too

2mth

ProfaneImmortalLv12ProfaneImmortal

Are you sure bro ? I read 3 ch and i feel like snape is vomiting on top of my head...

TheSonOfGod:Nah, he changed tunes about 18 in, so I have hopes

2mth

IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

thank you for that valuable information, as a person who absolutely hatew drama this is very much appreciated, have a good day sir.

2mth

IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

*hates*

Ireallylikereading:thank you for that valuable information, as a person who absolutely hatew drama this is very much appreciated, have a good day sir.
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2mth

KasiCairLv1KasiCair

No. It is worse. The first chapters made me want to vomit. It's bad. Disgusting even. As for the latter chapters? I dunno. Didn't read them yet. I will try. Will see. But really. I have no idea why this author thought it would be a good thing to give his transmigrated MC Snape's feelings. Logically, NOBODY would want that. It's like being mind-fked. It sucks and makes the story really bad. And the author writes in this stupid flowery way that reading is starting to get really irksome. It starts to feel like a chore.

Anotoki:Lol, surely it's not that bad

1mth