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BS_Entertainment
BS_EntertainmentAuthor2mthBS_Entertainment

author here, selfless review. I have several previous works that were dropped for a variety of reasons. AI: Progenitor will be coming back just working on the story.This story Is one I've worked on for a while, and I've really enjoyed building the unique world so check it out and let me know 😀

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Apocalypse Buyback System

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BS_Entertainment
BS_EntertainmentAuthorBS_Entertainment

thank you man!

dreamy_charcoal:I will do review at 100th episode in 3 accounts
dreamy_charcoal
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humm it's good man don't give up sometimes I wonder why chinies themed things go up fast

BS_Entertainment
BS_EntertainmentAuthorBS_Entertainment

thanks, I'm basically rewriting the story for the AI novel but once the rework is done I'll be bringing it back, for now though hopefully this novel can be enjoyed by people. if you have any thoughts or criticisms please let me know

dreamy_charcoal:humm it's good man don't give up sometimes I wonder why chinies themed things go up fast
dreamy_charcoal
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sure but how about exchange I am an author too in the process of merging my book

BS_Entertainment
BS_EntertainmentAuthorBS_Entertainment

sure can do, I like reading new works

dreamy_charcoal:sure but how about exchange I am an author too in the process of merging my book
dreamy_charcoal
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it's lovely you and me are kind of are in a same page lets see how we grow whatever it is don't stop writing I am with you I Haven't read all chapters I Will tomorrow then rate and give feedbacks focus on your writing comeback after you did your quota you know what do extras

dreamy_charcoal
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is my story good bro is there any room for improvement I am worried that I can't even write without reading my chapters again and again as doing this part time is hard without proper schedule

BS_Entertainment
BS_EntertainmentAuthorBS_Entertainment

I left a review, you've just got to keep improving grammar and sentence structure,the story idea itself is novel and unique enough

dreamy_charcoal:is my story good bro is there any room for improvement I am worried that I can't even write without reading my chapters again and again as doing this part time is hard without proper schedule
dreamy_charcoal
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that's to i really need it my friends said it sucks I should give up and all how about we exchange powerstones I Only have 2 per day bye have a productive year

BS_Entertainment:I left a review, you've just got to keep improving grammar and sentence structure,the story idea itself is novel and unique enough
dreamy_charcoal
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keep the pase never settle for less rather always try to make more man because more you update more will webnovel notices all the best

dreamy_charcoal
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you are doing it keep doing it

dreamy_charcoal
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hey why aren't you giving power stones even tho i did

dreamy_charcoal
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I will do review at 100th episode in 3 accounts