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2024-09-03 03:44

Painfully bad. The grammar is horrible, some of the sentences don’t even make sense. I ain’t gonna write a detailed review for this, but I will at least point out some of the things. Mc is dense as hell, a cliche I didn’t think I would see on this day and date. FL seems like the typical yandere with one sided love toward the MC. Basically, it is a wish fulfillment, with bad grammar and execution. You can already the next 100 chapters, MC is probably gonna not realize the FL is in love with him even when she openly shows it, then get confused when FL supposed gets jealous. But most of the readers on this app would still eat this up, since this is likely their type of wish fulfillment. I hadn’t been around for a while, so I thought the guys here might finally have started writing actual good things. I guess not. Read, if you like eating garbage. Don’t, if you like your sanity more. I don’t need to say more.

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