the mc is far too cringe. everything she says and does is creepy in a manipulator rapist sort of way. dont care about the sexual orientation of the character, dont care thats shes a woman, the mc is just an unlikeable creepy weirdo.

I’ve read a lot of twilight fics and this ranks among the top of them it’s a very good read Also tip for author the lgbt+🏳️‍🌈 tags are really unnecessary a yuri tag will do the trick just fine you’ll just be getting those haters leaving reviews Not sure of others on this app but I could care less for the gore bad language etc:

Its very good, has great characters... There isn't really much sus things or weird thing. The author's writing style is good and has a certain charm to it that draws me back to checking if there is a new chapters... Ignore the stupid reviews that are complaining.

Fantastic fic we must have more!!!!!!!!!

Love everything so far. Can't wait for more! Just so you know, in Inkstone, you can delete reviews that contain hateful content. No reason for the top review of your novel to be something so negative and ignorant.

The story has just started out, but the writing is solid, the characters are believable. With the time period setting being so early there is a lot of potential for new and interesting developments outside the typical canon to occur. The promise of future music elements is something I really like, as it enriches a story in conveying emotional depth. And most importantly the fluff, want to see more of it :) Never too much.

The fanfic started out absolutely amazing! But…ran into some problems. For one, there is a LOT of drama, most of which is completely unnecessary. Primarily between Rosalie and Robin (Rosalie is the love interest btw). The main point of drama that sort of ruined this fic for me, is Rosalie marrying another individual (a man) after Robin left the country for a few months. It came out of literally nowhere, and right after they got together (as in like a chapter or two). It made the entire build up of them getting together, seem to be for nothing. And just put even more drama in the way of what people actually want. The drama honestly gives me major Wattpad vibes. As in: The love interest cheats on the mc. The mc is still completely in love, and doesn’t truly move on. Once the love interest “realizes their mistake” they go back to the MC, who then accepts them back instantly with no repercussions. That’s sorta what this feels like is going to happen. Idk though, as that has yet to happen just yet. But there has been a flash forward that proves they are together in the future, which I honestly see as a negative, as it corners the author into that direction, should they ever wish to change their mind. It also just confirms to the user that Robin (the mc) WILL get back with Rosalie, even after Rosalie has basically cheated on her, and broken her heart (even worse considering they are literally mates, and cheating is one of the worst possible things you can do to a mate). Another problem that some might have with the fic, is how long it’s taking to get to canon. Personally this isn’t a problem, but for others, it might be. Considering we are going on 50 chapters, and she has yet to get to the canon timeline. Besides that, the only other thing I could do without, is the songs in like every single chapter. This is mostly cause it’s sorta c ringe, and nothing else. Anyways, that’s all! I hope those who are reading this to decide on whether or not to read this, made their decision! And I hope the author can understand that this is just what I feel, and some others have expressed. Have a good day!

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