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xAsura_
xAsura_Lv141yr
2024-03-12 22:44

Everything went well until chapter 18 and 19. I'd recommend the author to simply remake those two since they make no sense at all. However, it is your fanfic so feel free to do whatever. Otherwise, the characters seems fine (except ch.18-19), the writing is good and well the world background is MHA. Overall, great work (except ch.18-19) and good luck :)

My Hero Academia: World Fishing Quirk

LukasS
3.4
19 Chs

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Abeeba
AbeebaLv2

started great but then at chapter 18 it all just turned sour completely running it

1yr

Gotha
GothaLv14

Chapter 18 and 19 ruined everything, why the heck are trying to force the plot?

1yr
Damn_Toga
Damn_TogaLv4

It's good, only until ch 17, before the author destroyed his story at ch 18 and the final line at ch 19 and decided to protect his little ego by saying don't like don't read. well don't cry when the rating of your story goes downhill.

1yr
Abdurrahman_Harits
Abdurrahman_HaritsLv1

Here you go a one Star. If you don't like it just don't write a story ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

1yr
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

It started ok, not exactly good but a quality expected in fanfics, however the story was already showing signs for a while of being something like a bashing fic where characters are dumbed down or a Deku villain fic where the world works against him to force him to become a villain. It ended up being both cases. The villain part hasn't happened yet, but everything points to this path with a lot of dumbing down from the beginning (Deku not registering a physical or storage quirck when he won the fish) to prejudiced authors against quirckless and a completely stupid Aizawa who didn't bother to investigate the reports of a quirckless attacking someone who has a powerful quirck 45 times, not even after seeing Bakugou being aggressive and attacking Izuku.

1yr
Dagonoid
DagonoidLv2

I liked the concept. But the chapters are very short, please increase the length of the chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
OvelordOfDead
OvelordOfDeadLv1

It started off very well, but chapters 18 and 19 ruined everything with Izuku being expelled for no reason, and also the teacher ignoring the attitude of Chiuhuahua in Katsuki's Pitbull body.

1yr
Meruem_Astro
Meruem_AstroLv1

Author has daddy issues . . . . .

1yr
Kacper_Cwajda
Kacper_CwajdaLv3

Started out good, a bit like a Chinese novel with the powers to fish items in the multiverse, but it still could be good if this was executed properly. The MC is far from perfect, but it's only chapter 19, and he could develop in the future. Sadly, I won't see it because I'm dropping it because it went downhill from chapter 18 when Aizawa kicked him out of the hero course without any reason. Anyway, good luck on your way as an author.

1yr
Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv5

Great novel! I love fishing abilities, unfortunately I can’t continue with this after chapter 19 because it is a completely illogical twist. Well here’s hoping that there’ll be a clone of this novel soon!

1yr
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