Author tells the story in the form of flashbacks. He says, that something happened and recounts what happened, then an event in the present plays out, then time skip, then flashbacks, then another single thing happens, then another time skip. MFer took all the fun out of shadow slave. SS is good because of the interesting powers and the interactions the characters have, while barley surviving fighting horrors beyond human comprehension, but MC just casually can body awakened beasts and monster(which we get to read about in the form of flashbacks). MFer basically skipped the entire first arc of the forgotten shore. Like, why event WRITE starting from the nightmare and the academy if you are going to Speedrun till the castle? Just start AT the castle.

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Nice idea , continue auther you can make it

The characters feel bland and emotionless, there’s not a lot of dialogue between characters.

İyi bir kitaba benziyor. Merak ettiğim şey nephis gene geride mi kalıcak yoksa ayanokoji onun yerini mi alıcak???????????????????????????????

I really loved the idea for this work. the character dynamics are well put, logical progression but dialogues are a bit lacking. It is worrisome as you tend to skip arcs which can be justified as this is a fanfic but would love to see you. Hope you continue writing. Waiting for the updates. Great work.

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I admit that this masterpiece is the best Shadow Slave fanfiction *(Don't you dare stop him)* Go ahead and download more chapters if it doesn't threaten your safety

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