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Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv138mth
2024-05-15 03:53

I read 20 chapters and being honest the story is average, I'm not saying that is trash, but it's not mind blowing good, it's a nice read to pass the time, there are only a feel things that I didn't like, the MC and his cheat being of them, I know it's a erotica story, but it could have been better developed in my humble opinion, like the fact the MC is handsome is ok, but for every woman to be head over heels for him it's just boring, maybe I'm just pick, but you can give it try and if it's your cup of tea go for it.

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Lord_Azathoth
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No romance build up?

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