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2024-02-25 03:15

I love the introduction of the story although it needed a little update but I love it was interesting.

Duty Player: Virtual Reborn

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Dark_Daemon_2
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It's suprisingly good. Clumsy, yeah, but still really good.

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Quite alright, I can't tell the actual direction of this story, maybe because the chapters are few. Initially, it seemed like Ye Xui might want to grow stronger and avenge his father's death but then, he just woke up in the morning and boom, he was travelled to the future. And he began to play [Duty] on that very day. The write up is a little clumsy and needs some editing. If rechecked, the main character can get you sticked to him because he has some nice traits like coldness and as such. I slept while reading chapter 3, so it'll do good to help you sleep when you are in bed.

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I just had to leave a review. This book was skillfully written to captivate the heart and mind. I recommend this book

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