Story is great so far, I just hope you continue the story. It gets really old when new good stories come out and stop after like 5-10 chapters.

The descriptive writing is decent, displaying minimal mistakes. However, when the narrative ventures into metaphors and prophecies, the attempts often fall flat. The prose strives for a poetic touch, but it doesn't quite reach the intended impact. One noticeable aspect is the pacing, which tends to be fast. The narrative seems eager to rush through events, both past and future, leaving scant attention to the present moment. While this brisk pace allows for a lot of ground to be covered in each chapter, showcasing the far-reaching consequences of the main character's actions, it also means that character development and the personalities of the cast suffer. The story leans heavily on plot progression at the expense of deeper characterization. The main character himself is rather bland, lacking the engaging qualities that would keep readers invested in his journey. Although not particularly irritating, he fails to capture the reader's interest or empathy. This is a significant departure from the original works, which are known for their intricate politics, backstabbing, visceral violence and unique characters. Here, these elements are watered down, present only in small doses that never quite achieve the same intensity. For those who appreciated the original series for its dark and complex intrigue, this fanfic may feel disappointingly light. However, the lighter tone does lend the story a certain cozy, comforting quality that some readers might find appealing. The inclusion of the Minecraft world adds an interesting layer of comfort to the narrative. Despite the rapid pace, which often glosses over present events in favor of recounting the protagonist's past exploits and future plans, the impact of Minecraft elements on the Game of Thrones universe is handled thoughtfully. The way Minecraft items influence commerce and monopolies in Westeros is portrayed with a surprising degree of realism. However, this choice comes at the cost of narrative tension. The protagonist rarely encounters significant challenges or dangers, reducing the story's suspense and making the outcome feel somewhat predictable. For readers who crave character development, intricate world-building, and palpable struggles, this fanfic may fall short. However, for those who enjoy lighter, more comforting stories and are curious about the potential crossover between Minecraft and Westeros, this fanfic offers a unique and enjoyable read. The blend of familiar elements from both worlds creates a distinctive narrative that, despite its flaws, provides a pleasant escape.

too focused on minecraft, I'm lost, I give up at chapter 34, I made a maximum effort. the two game of throne fanfiction on minecraf are heavy with information, but the or ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos. managed not to overload with unknown information, and to offer a story that merges with GOT, this story does not happen. there are quite a few good points but it remains mired in a morass of information and terms which distract from the story. (the minecraft world accessible to the mc does not help)

its written well enough. but the minecraft thing really drags this down for me. for a serious world like game of thrones it just threw me off having Minecraft elements in it

it gets boring fast, you can't really invest in the story cause it is written so nonchalantly.

I really like this story, I hope it doesn't turn into a harem story. It has to be 140 words or letters, so I'm being forced to write more. It has to be 140 words or letters, so I'm being forced to write more.

Please don’t drop this I’m really enjoying it

I think it would be good if you put some tags to let new readers know what to expect but the story is good so far and so is the writting.

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