I only read two chapters, so maybe I shouldn't comment on this fanfic... but I couldn't continue reading, everything is very raw and unfiltered. who is the MC? what does he want? what's he like? How did he end up in this world? What is the vision of this fanfic? basically there is no introduction, there is only information and conversations that there is no type of preparation for the reader, it is possible that readers must guess the objective of each part written by the author, as it does not make anything apparent. It's a good proposal, and I was eager to try it since it's been a while since I read fanfic, but this needs to be worked on better, the first chapters are not at all inviting for readers.
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