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2024-11-06 15:00

this is just pure garbage it has good premise but the writer is either the laziest person around or doesn't understand story development conversations are trash some of the sentence structure is just atrocious people do not talk that way in real life at all i made it 3 chapters in and wanted to bleach my brain with how poorly written this is

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