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hero4hireLv111yr
2024-02-28 15:43

I get this is a harem but if every name character that get introudced gonna be another f%%kdoll him then what even is the point of this story?

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DivineLordOfSloth
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DivineLordOfSloth
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By the time you wrote the review, I had introduced three female characters and only one of them was in the harem. Your review makes perfect sense and I would like to know what made you feel that way so that I don't do that while writing further.

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Darth_Evolution898
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you fully focus on romance and don't actually write your storyline why rush romance in early chapters if you're actually planning to stick to a story line and not you running around talking about the story sometimes when the obvious goal is collecting women as f%$& dolls

DivineLordOfSloth:By the time you wrote the review, I had introduced three female characters and only one of them was in the harem. Your review makes perfect sense and I would like to know what made you feel that way so that I don't do that while writing further.
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Blank56666
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Some people are just wow they are commenting many things about this Nobel I think before you write a bad review you should read the work and then think if you can write something like this. I say mr Arthur you are doing good just please update daily.please

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The_man_The_myth
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The story is incredibly boring and is written like an mlt.

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Chill_House_
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Enjoying the story. Author is improving his writing throughout the story and making it better, just hope he didn't drop it because of some negative comments

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Random_Entity
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ULTIMATE POWER!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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IRoaSs
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alr. ill leave this here until the chaps reach about 50. hopefully u wont drop it author. its kinda rushed tho, im not an author to give advice but i think u should work on that

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Tazrune
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The story is great so far idk why people complain about the harem like webnovel fanfics are not 90 percent harem so if they have a problem with this novel boy do I have some bad news for you guys

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