Review Detail of Dig33 in Infinity Restaurant
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The idea isn't bad, but the execution is lame. If the meaning of words and the smoothness of reading the sentences in which the author placed them is compared to the flight of an airplane, the airplane was indeed able to take off successfully (the semantic load of the sentences is acceptable), but the aircraft is constantly tortured by turbulence (not critical, but extremely annoying). Earlier it was strongest in dialogs, but now also in the rest of the text. Dear author, I recommend doing a final proofread of the chapter the day after you finish writing it. This will help to fight the "blurring of the eye" effect. Personally, I believe that quality should prevail over quantity.
Infinity Restaurant
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You are absolutely right, I use a neural network translator. I have a lot of experience using it and in most cases I understand when the problem is caused by the program and when it is caused by the fact that it translates. I accept the possibility that I am wrong, but I would still like you to take the time to improve the way you express your thoughts in the text. The individual words and phrases are correct, but the manner of construction of both single and whole groups of sentences has room for improvement. I hope English-speaking readers will judge us. Dear author, I am not trying to insult you or anything like that, I am only pointing out the shortcomings I have noticed to the best of my knowledge. If other English-speaking readers say that I am wrong, I will delete my comment. All the best to you.
IsekaiTails:If your reading from a translator, sorry that's not my problem. The story is written in English. You're seeing errors where there aren't any because of that...