It’s a decent story but the writing quality is really bad. Every once in a while the author uses the script-dialogue thing where there’s the character’s name followed by colons. I always hate those and I understand using it for writing interviews and stuff but even then the author wrote like the most generic responses and interview questions ever. I think the author stopped doing the script-dialogue thing in later chapters since I don’t see them anymore but now they have a new problem. They really like starting off paragraphs with a character’s name and comma as an introductory modifier, which isn’t a problem, but they do it for several paragraphs in a row so it actually looks like they’re writing from a template. Creative writing is supposed to be creative, and writing like that gets boring real fast.
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chatGPT my guy, it does that
Wait this was chatGPT? All of it?
Primordial_Two:chatGPT my guy, it does that
yeah, most of the story it looks like. could also be they write in a chatGPT way but that would be rare
tt_g:Wait this was chatGPT? All of it?
