Author, you know your story is good, but I want to see the MC struggle a little, as being too overpowered isn't fun. Also, please make it a little creepy and scary since it's a horror world, and make the MC a man whom we look up to. A man of justice, love, and kindness, in this rotten and cursed world, where people just want to take advantage of others, there is a need for good people with good hearts. And for that, righteousness has to be preserved, for you, for all of us, so it's better if the MC becomes the beacon of hope. Let's cultivate some good hearts. Good luck. Bye!
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bro your name is freaking cruel death....
blud has seen unspoken horrors, He needs a little wholesomeness.
I smell weakness .
Whats the sauce for this girl with the choker around her neck?
