The story provides an intriguing synopsis, introducing concepts such as Mantras, Bodhisattvas, and superhuman abilities. The character of Kanzaki Hachiro is also given a unique struggle, setting the stage for interesting character development. However, it could benefit from further development and clarification of the world background. Overall, a promising story with potential for compelling plot and characters.
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