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Akila_Pc
Akila_PcLv411mth
2024-05-09 17:07

This is a good story with an interesting plot line. Enjoyable. But I feel like MC has too much luck and power system seems not very balanced. You, for 2 kids to slay A rank Monster at that level and age, it's like they are already better than normal grown up hunters. If Boss Monster was C + rank one it could be justified but Slaying S rank one is a bit too much, Even if he has the Martial Saint At that level of weak body rebound must be very big even if had to use martial saint's technique. Other thing is his skill adapt that skill can be Very OP according to how author handle the story. EX : MAHORAGA

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409 Chs

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Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

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kartik_porwal
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