Shameless review from author-san here~~. just give it try to read it and give me a review and comment about my first chapter so that I can be more enthusiastic about uploading the latest chapters

==========IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT TO NEW READER========== After I saw the many comments given on the early chapter I decide to make this announcement. At the beginning, I would like to inform new readers who want to read this novel that when I first wrote this novel I used my native language, namely Indonesian, and I translated it using Google Translate and I didn't have time to double check it at that time, so please understand that there are some words that don't make sense but as time goes by I have used various tools to make the words better and I also double-checked them with my own English skills. (Note: Some of the chapters i already edited like chapter 1-3) Also some people don't like it when I write names in each dialogue which gives the impression of being more of a script than a novel. Don't worry about the next chapters until now I've deleted it!

The story is fine and lives up to its title. However, I did have some issues with how quickly the first year concluded. In just 49 chapters, the entire first year was covered, which may have limited the author's ability to develop a more intricate plot. While I initially continued reading after the author resumed writing, I am considering dropping it soon as I feel satisfied with what I've read so far. The main character doesn't contribute much to the plot, which may have been intentional on the author's part to avoid improvising on the original storyline. Personally, I prefer a different storytelling approach for fanfics based on "Classroom of the Elite" after reading several of them, but others may have different opinions. The lack of focus on the main character earning points, especially after the initial karate incident, was disappointing. Additionally, the lack of clarity on class points and personal points throughout the story was frustrating. The author could have dedicated more effort to developing the romance aspect of the story rather than focusing solely on explicit content. Despite the initial challenges with grammar and readability, the story does improve over time. Overall, the emphasis on erotica over the original plot of "Classroom of the Elite" became more apparent as the story progressed.

Mc has no personality, he is so flat. Also the plot is flat too... There's no details in it. It feels like i reading a diary [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

this is translated fanfic right? from this ようこそ脱力系が行く実力至上主義の教室へ if i not wrong well good luck asjd;ajgdab divqwevdusbdg ub cCBdjsfhksdhfhsdjfk

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Grammar is trash, it feels like im reading a chinese mtl fanfiction, I've seen something better than this. The story is also trash and unrealistic, its more like hentai with plot. The character development is 0, MC is rapist and all the FMC is braindead. Overall this story is trash. Shame on you

Read it at your own risk. Brain aneurysm are the least of your own worries trying to comprehend the author writing.

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