webnovel
UberNuber
UberNuberLv1210mth
2024-07-18 23:41

At first I didn’t think I’d like it, MC started as the ‘wealthiest man in the world’ dying at age 110. This kind of protagonist isn’t something you’d be able to like… but fortunately (or unfortunately) the author does not make the MC act like a 100+ year old CEO/Boss instead the MC acts like you’d want him to. A mix of fun/serious. I only give Story Development 4 out of 5 because the author makes the system give out missions that can’t be turned down. This in my opinion is just bad writing, the System itself is already the ‘Beggar System’, the only way the MC can get stronger is by begging. Adding forced missions is just lazy. Lastly, it does suck that I won’t be able to read any further, but I’m never downloading the app.

Liked by 9 people

LIKE
Replies1
Typeshitnakjda
TypeshitnakjdaLv2

would you like to read my novel symbiogen ?

Other Reviews
Related Stories

Infinite Evolution: My Idle Evolution System

VOLUME 1 ENDS—CULTIVATION ERA DESCENDS!! “First were the Gates, and now you’re saying the world has been invaded by Aliens and we’re soon going to be turned into livestock…? Great…” —---------------- *Ding!* [You have awakened with the Idle Evolution System!] “The wha—” Suddenly thrown into a magical parallel world of the Earth he once knew, Cassius was greeted with powerful beings known as Hunters and the terrifying Gates that plagued the world. Moreover, he received a message… [To Idle, one must stay proactive!] [Firstly, you require Character Development!] “Character Development…?” [You seem a bit (A lot) overweight, and you resemble that of a goblin! What say we start there!?] {[Daily Quest 1:]} _________________ [Daily Quest - To Idle, one must stay proactive.] GOAL [INCOMPLETE] PUSH-UPS — [0/100] [INCOMPLETE] SIT-UPS — [0/100] [INCOMPLETE] CURL-UPS — [0/100] [INCOMPLETE] SQUATS — [0/100] [INCOMPLETE] RUNNING — [0/10km] REWARD - [1 Point in Charisma, 1 Point in Agility, 1 Point in Strength, and 1 Point in Endurance] _________________ “Is this torture!?” shouted the ugly, obese transmigrator Cassius. *Ding!* [No, it’s Character Development! ^-^] —---------------- 100 years ago, Earth was suddenly overwhelmed with the appearance of Gates and the horrifying monsters within those mystical portals. That was the First Major Calamity. Now, one hundred years later, the next major calamity has arrived—the subtle invasion of an Ancient Alien species from deep into the Milky Way Galaxy. Its undercurrents spread far and wide, with the threat an apocalyptic one. Yet, that is but the 2nd of Three Major Calamities as per prophesied by the famed prophet, Baba Yaga. The Third Calamity, and the most dangerous of the Calamities, is one that will bring about the true END of the world, but only if the Second Calamity can be overcome by humanity… What does this Third Calamity detail, one might ask…? To know the answer to that, one would have to brave past the first Two Calamities and stare into the abyss, praying to all Gods known to man that the Abyss does not stare back also into you… ----------------- Discord: https://discord.gg/2fDHq9F8eB Every Magic Castle Gift = 7 Chapters Every 100 PS = 1 Chapter Every 50 GT = 1 Chapter ko-fi.com/astral_pandemonium Every $15 donated to my Kofi will force me to post another Chapter!

Astral_Pandemonium · Eastern
4.0
435 Chs