Review Detail of ZEXT in I was reborn as the 3rd prince

Story is good but execution is bad The atmosphere around Mc seems tedious and unvarying. MC’s father exhibits no emotional response upon the birth of his own child. It’s as if he’s an emotionally distant figure, submerging a six-month-old baby in cold water without any apparent concern. His callous behavior leaves one bewildered. Why not allow MC to reach at least Five year of age before subjecting them to such harsh treatment? Even animals tend to treat their young with more care and affection. The lack of kindness and love from those around MC is palpable. Instead, it feels like everyone is assessing the child’s potential and calculating how much benefit they can derive from an infant who hasn’t even learned to speak yet in which his parent are included . that just a small part of it anyway polish your work. keep honing your craft! May your writing journey be filled with growth and success. Good luck! 📚✨