Review Detail of Hollowmonk in Avatar: Third Son of The Fire Lord

I went to chapter 19, the story is good and has a future for its audience. I prefer free characters, who despite being linked to the main plot, also follow their own story. I believe that because of the many points of view, it was a bit of a hindrance. Because that's what a fanfic is, an out-of-the-ordinary character in an already existing plot. But I don't take away from your story, it's very good. Rich in information and feelings. Good luck. Ass:. Hollowmonk