Review Detail of Ikasuki in Time Effect ( A Mass Effect Fanfiction)

Honestly it’s bad… 1 st chapter isnt even a chapter it’s not even an overview of the 1st game. It’s worse, way WORSE. In a few sentence the author just say we beat saren e , sidestepped the collector and I got a harem… like What THe actual’fuck? Where is the story? Character interraction? Developing trust? Changing some bit of the scenario in a meaningful way? Trash fic trash writing skill, don’t waste your time.