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Julio_Santoyo
Julio_SantoyoLv48mth
2024-08-04 11:35

Great story so far but fair warning about latest chapters. Without trying spoil much. Story is great but if people have issues with certain pairings you mighty not like current developments signs which I admit could be a nothing burger. Lets just say certain characters who where with MC out of nowhere are showing signs of attraction to Joker which makes no sense at that point in story. To put it frankly feels forced and NTR/Cucking. Its fine when a story makes sense how it can possibly occur but if one of them has sexual relationship already with MC and other has signs of same possible attraction it just feels random out of nowhere. If Im wrong sure ill admit Im wrong . Than why write on that way that feels that can be taken the wrong way aka incoming NTR. Regardless, again great story reccomend to most just latest chapters around 75+ gets me annoyed. Just makes no sense at that point in story. Hoping Im wrong will see.

Time Effect ( A Mass Effect Fanfiction)

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4.3
149 Chs

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Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14

So what happens?

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Pop0
Pop0Author

I will shamelessly give my fic a 5-star rating, because, why not? Anyway, I'm still a newbie in pretty much every aspect, but I'll try my best to create the fic I pictured in my mind. It will be rough around some parts, but I hope we enjoy reading it. There will be a major plot point regarding the cycles ( it will be easy to figure out what that plot point is, as I will be dropping hints here and there), but I don't plan on making much content with that part. It will be a harem, with Liara, Shepard, and Tali on it. I don't know if I will add others, but for now, that's it. I'll try my best to give all companions from the game their screen time, but I can't promise it will be good or that I will manage to do it. We will see how that goes. 2 Chapters a week, one on Wednesday and one on Saturday. Thanks for the support and I hope you guys enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing it.

1yr

nailkaizer_simone
nailkaizer_simoneLv1

THE AUTHOR IS A TRUE MASS EFFECT FAN only a Mass Effect fan shows so much love for the story and the fans of the games..THIS NOVEL IS AWESOME IT STARTS WEIRD BUT YOU LOVE IT BY THE END The MC is not marry sue but a human with a strong will ..THIS NOVEL IS A LOVE LETTER TO ALL MASS EFFECT FANS AND THE MOVIE THE EDGE OF TOMORROW...cmon I am ok with this novel to have harem because in the games you can only romance one girl witch I hate ..the harem is the fun part and the author those it right., THANK YOU, AUTHOR,

10mth
Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14

The writing level isn't the best, the author overly simplifies most parts of the story. It also feels like the author doesn't have the most complete knowledge of the canon events and lore. He either just skimmed the story without delving deep into the lore or he was just too young to understand the nuances of the lore especially political and sociological points. Currently the story isn't something I would waste time reading, it is mostly because of how the story utterly fails to take advantage of the strongest point of the setting. Lore, characterisation and background.

1yr
MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

AUTHOR THANK YOU FOR THE MASS EFFECT NOVEL I AM A HUGE MASS EFFECT FAN I LOVE TO SEE MORE MASS EFFECT NOVELS BECAUSE I LOVE THE GAMES. I hope in the future the author makes a Mass Effect novel centered around a Mass Effect fan reincarnated inside Liera Tsoni's body with a technology system she saves the GETH and RACHNI and MASS EFFECT FAN UNITED THE GALAXY...love to see THANK YOU BABE

1yr
Kurosis
KurosisLv4

Fk I can’t remember the last time a story was so good I felt the need to write a review. The start was alright felt like eating junk food but then with every chapter being a more and more luxurious pallet till with pain I caught up to the latest chapter. Author I’m glad you deleted your story and waited a few years till you came up with this masterpiece. Please don’t drop and deff don’t delete this it would be a shame

1yr
Psan
PsanLv6

ok... I played all mass effect games and got 100% of things... But that was YEARS ago but i still remember quite a lot. The only game i didnt play was Andromeda since my pc cant handle it X_X... Lets see how it goes, the premise seems good. Lets see what you do with your character wisdom and intelligence. Since he resets the loop every 28 years... 9 times... THat means he has lived and learnt for over 200 years. For a human that is A LOT. Lets see how you do things as having lived that much, he should show it with his way of thinking, actions and decisions. He cannot commit rookie mistakes and so on. Its hard to write a very intelligent protagonist

11mth
Piotr_Uklejewski
Piotr_UklejewskiLv4

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

1yr
ChaosVoid666
ChaosVoid666Lv4

I haven't even read the story but I'm gonna give this a 4.8 rating just because it is a Mass Effect fic. After how they massacred the franchise with Andromeda, anything that is even closely related to the ME Trilogy is literal godsend for me.

1yr
average_ff_enjoyr
average_ff_enjoyrLv4

love it can't wait for more

1yr
abdun_tak
abdun_takLv1

thes is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

4mth
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