keep it up only thing I would recommend is to make the chapters longer

This fanfiction is excellent, I suggest it.😉

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Writing Quality: A bit GPTy, otherwise technically ok. Stability of Updates: Dropped or on hiatus Story Development: MC lacks clear motivation and all agency is with the system. Went from 0-WAR in under 30 chapters. Its progressing through events, but there is no real narrative through line outside of system objectives. The OG MC's fate is apparently in flux as they may end up as Pokémon to collect for system rewards. Character Design: Serviceable, but could be improved. Some characters are off model though. World Background

Haye when the mc is slave to the system... Good story ruined by the system as always....................................................................................................

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