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SandKastle
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2024-02-24 11:15

Here comes the mandatory author review! I’m back with a new novel, and it’s about basketball this time. This will center around high school basketball, so it will also show friendships, personal growth, teenage struggles, and maybe a little bit of romance? This will not contain any harem; however, a lot of people will like (and dislike) our main character! Don’t expect it to be fast-paced, but I’ll try my best to write it as fun as possible. Another disclaimer! Although this story contains a system, it also highly relies on the MC’s hard work. Treat this review as a q-and-a portion and drop your questions below!

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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Nba?

SandKastle
SandKastleAuthor

I do plan on having the MC in the pro-league. However, it will first center around high school sports, similar to existing sports anime.

Haku_Ouroboros:Nba?
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

pro league?? nba? or random asían league

Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6

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Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6

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M24_gamers
M24_gamersLv4

plz don't make the main character too op if do so plz do introduce even more powerful opponents

KareNjkee
KareNjkeeLv4

Will it be soon 1day limited free?

Ikka_Sne
Ikka_SneLv14

can you do without the romance? atleast not have the MC in Any romance.. dont care about other char..

BlueBird_3516
BlueBird_3516Lv2

it's limited free today

KareNjkee:Will it be soon 1day limited free?
Tsukuyoomii
TsukuyoomiiLv15

Impossible it has romance but the girl that won should not have won imo

Ikka_Sne:can you do without the romance? atleast not have the MC in Any romance.. dont care about other char..
FieryCheetah
FieryCheetahLv13

Can you tell me which one won? Lina or Suzy? I dont care about the spoilers

Tsukuyoomii:Impossible it has romance but the girl that won should not have won imo
Tsukuyoomii
TsukuyoomiiLv15

lina for what i remeber

FieryCheetah:Can you tell me which one won? Lina or Suzy? I dont care about the spoilers
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Patriarchleechlord
PatriarchleechlordLv14

TLDR: if you played basketball or an actual fan of the sport I don't recommend this novel author lacks basic knowledge of the sport and it is noticeable as early as chapter 15 when author tried writing a 3v3 match and MC made a variant of the traveling violation called up and down but didn't get called on it they simply continued play like nothing happened. Author tried to describe the MC as a theoretical player but couldn't play cause of his disability this would have been fine if the author knows a lot about basketball sadly author is a complete noob and probably never played a single game of basketball their entire life. My proof on chapter 15 MC did a violation known as up and down basically a traveling violation MC jumped with the ball on his hand trying to dunk but due to his lack of experience misjudged his jump and fell short this would have been fine if the MC's team immediately lost possession of the ball giving it to the other team but nope author just continued the play like nothing happened. This is unbelievable since the MC himself should know the basic rules if he was such a fan of the game and had theoretic knowledge of it then his opponents also played basketball previously and should know the rules they should have called the MC out and taken possession of the ball but none of that happened instead both sides acted like the most basic and fundamental rule doesn't exist Traveling is as basic as Football's/Soccer's no hands touching the ball rule. This is not a basketball story merely a slice of life with a fantasy system and an outsider's incorrect knowledge of basketball. There are probably more mistakes after that but I didn't continue past that chapter. Author should do a much more thorough research of the sport if they lack the first hand experience of playing the actual game since their Basketball matches would never even get close to believable because of fundamental flaws to the game's rules.

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