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Review Detail of RiddleEYeus01 in Tower of God: Gamer System

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This is my honest review on the book.1) The writing quality is bad, a lot of errors here and there. I don't know if your main language isn't English, that's fine but just use grammerly or any translation app. 2) Story development is mid because it still follow the same pattern and too much drama on unnecessary things like when Yuri asked Headon where bam and zero were going knowing fully well that it's the second floor since she was once a regular. That and others were a put off for me TBH.3) Character design I gave him 2stars to be generous because he's very stupid, an Assassin giving the chance to have 3 wishes because he's going to another world that he doesn't know and what did he do he gave the wish to rob to make it for him😭. Bro made this hit hard for me. A normal human would want to be jacked to the teeth but all he got was a sharingan, telekinesis, the gaming system idea was good but the rewards were just too low. like the crown game quest which the rewards were so low as he's putting his life on the line there are many more decision he made that made me think how was he an Assassin 😂😭 and why was the system grading his intelligence 12 😭.4) Updating stability: The update is consistent for me, and that's the only redeeming thing about the novel since all TOG ff author drop the books soon after.World background: Just gave you 3 stars because you are doing your best to write this novel since we readers are shy to do ours😂😂😂😂😂

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