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LegendaryNexus
LegendaryNexusLv49mth
2024-02-06 13:27

Author I'm going to be completely honest with you. The reason I'm reading this story is due to the fact that there aren't many tower of god stories that are that good and yours is one of them that is good. However there are many areas of improvement. For one, there's the writing itself. Maybe it's due to other stories that I've read but this story has very little 'meat' so to speak. paragraphs are pretty short and the OC's thoughts are little 2 dimensional. However again that does not mean the story isn't bad by any means. it could just use some work. There are a couple of mispelling here and there but my brain automatically corrects it due to past history with other works. The interactions are a bit dry but that's to be expected from a 'assassin' or 'hitman'. you most likely made it that way to save yourself time in updating the story. some more backround on the character would be nice too as to help us understand the character more. I very much like the update speed and I do hope that you can continue this story to the best of your abilities. That is it for my review and I hope you have a wonderful day

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ShadowPanda_538
ShadowPanda_538Author

Thank you. and I'll continue to improve my writing and add more development for my character.

SalveYing
SalveYingLv11

I love honest comments; you inspire me to read this fanfic

primordialzero
primordialzeroLv2

I haven't started reading but don't stop since there are very few tower of god fics please.

ShadowPanda_538:Thank you. and I'll continue to improve my writing and add more development for my character.
KING_ABBASI
KING_ABBASILv4

brother i am giving you power stones without reading it why cuz tower of god and i hope you don't drop this🙏

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