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Arima544
Arima544Lv1310mth
2024-02-17 20:55

Very solid fan-fic, there really isn’t anything I can criticize so far. Grammar is good, story has it’s own sense of direction, and the mc acts logically. Ironically I like this story 10x more then the original Questism. Definitely worth the read, can’t wait to see the eventual interactions between mc and lookism characters.

start as a thug in ptj verse (lookisme and Questism…)

True_Mahou_2_0
4.8
32 Chs

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True_Mahou_2_0
True_Mahou_2_0Author

Thank you , your opinions motivate me

10mth
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ark772
ark772Lv12

bro plz don t drop it i love ptj fanfic i beg g you there are rarely any ptj fanfic jkjnnnkkkkkkkkkkkknklllllnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

10mth

jeffmiste
jeffmisteLv4

VERY glad to see a new lookism/questism/manager kim (maybe) fanfic, has a good start and the protagonist isn't cringy or an idiot so I have high hopes

10mth
HeroesM
HeroesMLv3

So far this is the best PTJ fic i ever read,great development and solid story line,so i hope you can continue writing this Masterpiece because i really really enjoyyyy it😊😊

2mth
pingvinchik
pingvinchikLv1

Reveal spoiler

10mth
yoshi_mitsu
yoshi_mitsuLv4

sike man so far good story issue qqefcxvxv

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Anmol_Shrestha_7840
Anmol_Shrestha_7840Lv3

I love this fic

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kugi45443
kugi45443Lv2

in the end you left this fanfic😭😭😭😭 even though your account is still active

3mth
Michael_Putinho
Michael_PutinhoLv1

Keep it up, boy! no matter how stupid and forced the story is, I like it! special respect for the choice of character, but it seems to me that only his name remains from Hajun, he is not at all similar in personality to the original.

8mth
Ep_E_X
Ep_E_XLv2

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ world background ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ A good story.. and good job for the author.. I'm at the latest chapter currently and I can say that's it's been great so far.. I'm just a bit disappointed since he conquer Gangbuk too fast.. well i just hope the author don't drop this ..

8mth
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