Review Detail of UNYIELDING_NIGHT in path of perseverance

Greetings, dear readers. I want to assure you that this novel is on a path of continuous improvement. As i embark on this journey, anticipate enhancements in writing style, chapter length, depth of world-building, and vivid descriptions. While the initial chapters may reflect a style of amateurish writing, given my background as a beginner in writing and non-native english speaker, rest assured that this is temporary. Improvement will be rapid in terms of quality, especially with the feedback I hope to receive from you, the readers. I encourage you to be as critical as needed; your perspectives are fundamental in refining the novel that has been on my mind. Thank you.