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carnage212356
carnage212356Lv410mth
2024-02-29 19:19

Binged it all in a day and have no regrets. The writing and grammar are fantastic with no mistakes and flows with no issue. I've really enjoyed the character you've developed so far, especially in the latest chapter (18) with the interaction between the two dragons. Looking forward to more in the future

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JustHavinFunReadin
JustHavinFunReadinLv11

Like, it could be worse, but the grammar is by no means perfect, and the flow is generally pretty bad. It's very good for a TL, but it's not actually good.

carnage212356
carnage212356Lv4

well then we have differing opinions then. I will admit that the grammar has had recent issues but I more meant the flow of words and sentences. Not the general storyline, which I enjoy anyways.

JustHavinFunReadin:Like, it could be worse, but the grammar is by no means perfect, and the flow is generally pretty bad. It's very good for a TL, but it's not actually good.
JustHavinFunReadin
JustHavinFunReadinLv11

The flow got better, I think. I wouldn't have written this comment now.

JustHavinFunReadin:Like, it could be worse, but the grammar is by no means perfect, and the flow is generally pretty bad. It's very good for a TL, but it's not actually good.
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