Writing Quality: Only saw two mistakes and that was just typos, aside from that it's pretty solid and well immersive. || Story Development: The story is moving quite well, although I was a little surprised when he was transported to another world, but that only reason I was, is because he already built the initial characters well enough to make them interesting. It's a System novel, so yeah, the story development is quite solid. || Character Design: The characters are well written like what I said earlier. He wrote them well enough for me to have interest in them, they're all written in a way that makes them feel like they could have their own stories, of course, it wouldn't be saying much since we want more of the fantasy aspect of the novel. The MC is great, so don't worry about him being a wuss, he's a bit of an edgy, but don't worry it's in a good way. || Updating Stability: Still a new novel, so can't say much, but so far, it's been steady. || World Background: We don't know much about the world physically but so far, I've learnt the more intangible aspects of the world, in other words, based only on statements. But the best world building are the ones that doesn't stress a reader's brain much, best take it progressively and enjoyably. In other words, the author doesn't info dump, so y'all are safe.
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