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Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv52mthDarth_Ullyses

1st thing is that the MC is a slave to the system. 2nd using -this- instead of "this" in dialog or in easier term speaking.

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vault across the multiverse

Nashi103

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Dropletcloud
DropletcloudLv5Dropletcloud

Why separate? Was it abusive? #Ididn'treadbutI'mcurious

Nashi103
Nashi103AuthorNashi103

At the moment it is. As long as he gains strength, he will be able to separate himself from the influence of the system since currently his existence is tied to the system which is the leash around his neck and the one who firmly holds the leash is the Goddess of destiny, and well according to grammar, As such, I do not speak English natively, so I appreciate the help with your comment.