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Maybonnie
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2024-02-02 10:02

So far it is one of my favorite fics, I give a low rating so as not to break my expectations in case it is put on hiatus. good fic, but I have a doubt, apart from the system that the protagonist and the zombies will have, will there be other more advanced fantasy things? You already know how evolved zombies and people evolved by crystals or other things (many Chinese fics), or will it be more or less normal with only the system as a trap element?

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KanmuruZ
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About the development of strength, think about it like "What did the infection do to the people who didn't turn undead?" After all it's proven in the manga that even if someone dies of natural causes they still turn undead, unless their brain is mush. I hope everyone like the future developments. While I might mix some zombie media elements I will stay as grounded as I can. Thank you for reading my history.

NOIR_THE_PROMODIAL
NOIR_THE_PROMODIALLv4

well it has only ten chapters so I won't read it for now, i will yoink it in ma collection.

KanmuruZ:About the development of strength, think about it like "What did the infection do to the people who didn't turn undead?" After all it's proven in the manga that even if someone dies of natural causes they still turn undead, unless their brain is mush. I hope everyone like the future developments. While I might mix some zombie media elements I will stay as grounded as I can. Thank you for reading my history.
Joao_Pedro_5293
Joao_Pedro_5293Lv13

what is the complete harém?

KanmuruZ:About the development of strength, think about it like "What did the infection do to the people who didn't turn undead?" After all it's proven in the manga that even if someone dies of natural causes they still turn undead, unless their brain is mush. I hope everyone like the future developments. While I might mix some zombie media elements I will stay as grounded as I can. Thank you for reading my history.
KanmuruZ
KanmuruZAuthor

Nothing is in stone yet but you can be sure that: Kyoko Hayashi, Shizuka Marikawa, and Saeko Busujima will be on it. The others we will see how the story goes...

Joao_Pedro_5293:what is the complete harém?
literl010
literl010Lv1

Your rating is nonsensical. Low rating = less readers = author discouraged. It's a self fulfilling prophecy that you're happy contributing to.

Odil
OdilLv14

since when is 3 stars and a half a 'low' rating? I'm tired of webnovel always having either 5 stars or 1 star.

literl010:Your rating is nonsensical. Low rating = less readers = author discouraged. It's a self fulfilling prophecy that you're happy contributing to.
literl010
literl010Lv1

Did you not read the review? The mental gymnastics required to consciously rate a "favorite fic" lower because other fics in the past have been abandoned is impressive. It contributes to a lower score than average, especially because most fics are rated highly. I'm sure you know just how poor a fic has to be to get below a 4-4.5 rating on WN, so much so that a lot of readers skip them when it gets down that low.

Odil:since when is 3 stars and a half a 'low' rating? I'm tired of webnovel always having either 5 stars or 1 star.
Odil
OdilLv14

the problem then isn't with the review but with WN review system. "Don't blame the player blame the rules" kinda deal I guess. But the thing is, as much as I like this book I wouldn't score it as high as a few others, so then how do you make that distinction, between ok / good fics, and absolute gems?

literl010:Did you not read the review? The mental gymnastics required to consciously rate a "favorite fic" lower because other fics in the past have been abandoned is impressive. It contributes to a lower score than average, especially because most fics are rated highly. I'm sure you know just how poor a fic has to be to get below a 4-4.5 rating on WN, so much so that a lot of readers skip them when it gets down that low.
literl010
literl010Lv1

That's fine, I have no problem with low ratings, you should rate the fic whatever you think it deserves. What I was criticizing was rating a 'favorite fic' lower just because you're scared it might be abandoned. Someone else gave this a lower rating because they didn't like the author's username...

Odil:the problem then isn't with the review but with WN review system. "Don't blame the player blame the rules" kinda deal I guess. But the thing is, as much as I like this book I wouldn't score it as high as a few others, so then how do you make that distinction, between ok / good fics, and absolute gems?
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