Review Detail of Dani in Reincarnation as Obito Uchiha

I don't want to be harsh or whatever, the idea is interesting, how it's implemented is quite rushy. Some inconsistency but it's ok, I would say as an excuse, it's a fanfic. What broke my heart was grammar, spelling and tense. There are some online correctors that exist. You can try chatgpt to help you. Not being a jerk, just trying to give you some advice to get better.