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Dani
DaniLv141yr
2024-02-14 10:09

I don't want to be harsh or whatever, the idea is interesting, how it's implemented is quite rushy. Some inconsistency but it's ok, I would say as an excuse, it's a fanfic. What broke my heart was grammar, spelling and tense. There are some online correctors that exist. You can try chatgpt to help you. Not being a jerk, just trying to give you some advice to get better.

Reincarnation as Obito Uchiha

Suryaputra_Karan
2.3
36 Chs

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Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthor

thanks for understanding

1yr
Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthor

No need - I have no respect for this language.

1yr
ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Did you fking just recommend chat gpt

1yr
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Kqro
KqroLv4

Don't use gpt, it will ruin the flow with its flowery writing

Suryaputra_Karan:thanks for understanding
1yr
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Dani
DaniLv14

there is also grammarly or linguee 😂 Chatgpt is the easiest, time and quality wise

ScarletQC:Did you fking just recommend chat gpt
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1yr
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ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Recommend those, never chatgpt

Dani:there is also grammarly or linguee 😂 Chatgpt is the easiest, time and quality wise
1yr
daoist_shaheer
daoist_shaheerLv4

Why😂

Suryaputra_Karan:No need - I have no respect for this language.
1yr
Other Reviews
SecretLeaf
SecretLeafLv2

So Far Too good,Just expect from the author that he is consistent and not forget about This Series BTW Author if you need any help contact me on discord, If you need my discord Reply me

1yr

_Harsh_
_Harsh_Lv14

just a bad wish fulfilment story with literally 5yr old kage lvl mc learning sage mode 😭😭

1yr
Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4

Really trash novel written by a guy who has no idea about the world of Naruto. The grammar is terrible and the spelling isn’t any better. The characters are 1 dimensional and have nothing special about them. The brains of all the people are lowered to 1 IQ to fit the stupid and rash actions of the the mc. Overall I would not recommend this garbage unless you have nothing better to read

1yr
Gabriel_4110
Gabriel_4110Lv1

Terrible fanfiction. The author has never read or seen Naruto because the timeline of events is completely wrong.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

1yr
NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

La qualité est médiocre [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
Jarusauskas
JarusauskasLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
LGK_maore
LGK_maoreLv4

really excited to see further chapters ....you have my support author🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🙋‍♂️🙋‍♂️🙋‍♂️🙋‍♂️

1yr
Puffin_lore
Puffin_loreLv4

Story had potential but author seems like a 12 year old and it became really weird

10mth
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Mc: [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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