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Carlos_Lozano
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It is really intriguing. For a harem novel without any detailed spicy moments it's really well done. The story has kept me wanting more. I wish we would have spent just a little more time with the prince as he was in the first couple of chapters. Drama. espionage, action, broken systems and its all building up to an op mc and I'm here for that. The Cons 1. pronoun mishaps here and there will make me reread a sentence 2. number mishaps example 300,000 will sometimes be referenced as only 30,000 causing confusion 3. the worst part is having to wait for more chapters Author keep up the good work! Please do a mass release of chapters so I can buy them faster. Put this review as a spoiler because some things I mentioned do happen in later chapters.

Having children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wife

Summer fades into autumn.

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Lewk_Santos
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do you know it's raw title?