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Carlos_Lozano
Carlos_LozanoLv156mth
2024-07-28 19:03

Where to start. The book is great. A few translation issues here and there but it's the usual pronouns, misspelled words and a few times I had to reread a sentence to make it click. The story is great, good implementation of modern weapons and technology. I like the fact the MC is not overly reliant on them and is cautious. Would like for him to actually start learning martial arts or cultivation techniques. What I mean by that is to actually learn how to utilize his skills so that when his weapons aren't able to get the job done he can actually defend himself. For example his fight against the Tianqi king the latest barbarian conquer if it wasn't for rong the Celestial moon palace leader the MC might have been cooked. I would also like to see more of his interactions with his children every now and then. Maybe just a small sentence. It's a good book. I would recommend.

Having children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wife

Summer fades into autumn.
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Pankek
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I really hate modern weaponsssssssssssss

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Carlos_Lozano
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Reveal spoiler

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Smash_Channel
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overall, I think it is a great book so far, but in one chapter or sentence, it might say he killed twenty thousand and the two hundred, then back twenty thousand just think it needs consistency same goes for the realms mentioned

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Winzentwinni
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IsaacDUCK
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I dropped as soon as I read desert eagle, wth is a modern weapon doing in a eastern cultivation novel.

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Erie_Abreu_6358
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People don’t know how rare this kind of novel is in Chinese novels. There has never been a kingdom building novel where they conquer the whole world by a sect but by kingdom, conquer soldiers, and modern weapons that’s just unique really this is like unique unique. I bet you can’t find one that is a ruler in Chinese novels, where they conquer other lands not by sect by being a ruler. If you can find a Chinese novel, where is the ruler conquering other lands tell me because this is the only one I ever found except earth online.

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Krozam_00
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Pretty good political, kingdom building wuxia story. The system is really generous, but aside from dual cultivation benefits, the major jackpots come fairly rarely, only when his children are born (which is not overly often, since many in his harem hare trouble conceiving due to high martial arts realm). The MC is fairly likeable... Neither dumb nor genius, neither naive nor cruel, rather lustful, a good ruler and leader. Very reliant on his system, but at least he doesn't waste it, he makes good use of everything he's given. The harem is ever-expanding and some of the girls don't really impress you with their character depth, but at least the author / MC doesn't forget them once they're conquered. The world-building is decent enough. The best parts of this, and where the main focus lies (outside of the romantic stuff) is the territory development and the politics. The translation quality is quite mediocre, with a few annoying recurring issues such as a certain female character frequently called "Mr." and "Grandmaster" often used for both the actual Grandmaster realm as well as the preceding Master realm, which is really confusing. All in all, it's a pretty good read for fans of political fantasy.

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Willysu
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This is a good read, but the miss-use of the term master and grandmaster is getting frustrating.

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