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2024-07-28 19:03

Where to start. The book is great. A few translation issues here and there but it's the usual pronouns, misspelled words and a few times I had to reread a sentence to make it click. The story is great, good implementation of modern weapons and technology. I like the fact the MC is not overly reliant on them and is cautious. Would like for him to actually start learning martial arts or cultivation techniques. What I mean by that is to actually learn how to utilize his skills so that when his weapons aren't able to get the job done he can actually defend himself. For example his fight against the Tianqi king the latest barbarian conquer if it wasn't for rong the Celestial moon palace leader the MC might have been cooked. I would also like to see more of his interactions with his children every now and then. Maybe just a small sentence. It's a good book. I would recommend.

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