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TBJ5K
TBJ5KLv145mth
2024-07-28 03:26

Has so much potential, but the way that you write makes me feel braindead, you explain what obviously just happened. Only reason I'm not dissing it too bad is because it's a good plot, which is the sad reality of most fics. Good plot, bad writing.

Not a Spider, But a Dragon

DRAGONS_EYE
4.0
163 Chs

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DRAGONS_EYE
DRAGONS_EYEAuthor

Thank you for your review! This is my first story. When I started writing this story, I had no prior experience writing a long form of literature. I am trying to improve my writing skills and will hopefully be able to write a better story soon.

5mth
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GOD_001
GOD_001Lv1

I think the only problem is that MC has dragon genes but is still the same Peter.There is little to no character development. MC accepts everything and looks like a system slave.It's still the same nonsense that with great power comes great responsibility, spiders in all multiverses have already lost their loved ones because of this saying.

10mth

TrueFool
TrueFoolLv2

Childish.............................................................................................................................................................

9mth
Eldermask
EldermaskLv14

Reveal spoiler

9mth
DRAGONS_EYE
DRAGONS_EYEAuthor

Shameless Author's review. This is my first story I am writing seriously. As such, I ask all of my readers to give it a try. This story will show you Peter Parker in a completely different form which you have never seen before. Hope you like it!

11mth
Troy145
Troy145Lv4

i am sorry but most of the time while reading the story it feels like he is only thinking like an idiot, getting pushed around while having those powers and have no change of mind after being a dragon, it feels like mc is just a pet for everyone to talk about his looks only, no real contribution to the story

6mth
IAMVEGITO
IAMVEGITOLv4

Reveal spoiler

11mth
adil_Ell
adil_EllLv4

This story has a lot of potential but its the way the story goed feels dead.

7mth
Jetmach
JetmachLv3

It's a good story but he like many others, he joins some organization (shield, x-men, whatever). Does no one say no anymore? I will probably come back to the story eventually, but just once I would like someone to say no and then go on a rampage when they push it. Anyway, enjoy.

9mth
multiverses_sage
multiverses_sageLv4

it's good but I need more chapters to know what is going on . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

11mth
Victor_Adiogo
Victor_AdiogoLv2

It has a lot of potential, but it is very painful to read, the dialogues don't seem natural and expository, not to mention that it seems to treat the reader like an idiot for always repeating information.

5mth
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