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2024-02-03 06:07

Your already off to a good start as a newbie author, so kudos to you as well, and I'm impressed because even though your chapters are short(Dw guys they grow longer as you read more) being able to pump out 40 chapters in 5 days is phenomenal, well done author and thanks for the good read (Ps: try creating an update schedule and then you won't fall into a writers block like I did, but you don't have to if you're able to be consistent regardless of how much u pump out)

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hey! thank you! well I will think about making it at least 1500 words, I like this 800-1200 chaps because they r quick and it's easy for me to check them up. It wasn't hard to put it up coz I have many docs ready to be uploaded here but I'm removing mistakes and trying to change my oryginal storyline. THanks again for review!

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