not bad read, but the mc is not the brightest not stupid but yeah,for exaple he keeps showing his powers even tho he says that he wants to keep them secret. mc powers are visual you can see when he using it and what it does so saying that he doest want explain it to others sounds a bit stupid to me. you can lettery say its magic 99%of adventures dont even onderstand magic or how it works same for the most gods in the novel hestia and other magic gods tell that mortal magic is just the manifestation of there hart desire in other word gods dont realy now how mortal magic works
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