Review Detail of Don_Diegow in Aegon Snow
Review detail
a forced story at many points. It even makes you want to read it at the beginning but as you progress the need to swallow the script is very forced... nonsense things, facilities, absurdities and "magic powers" are the last trick to bury the plot.
Aegon Snow
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Ghostrider0002:Too bad you didn't like my story, if you have nothing to read come back here maybe the story will evolve in a direction you prefer
I haven't started reading it yet, but I admire your maturity in accepting criticism, author, I'm going to start reading because of that.
Ghostrider0002:Too bad you didn't like my story, if you have nothing to read come back here maybe the story will evolve in a direction you prefer
Crims0n_:I haven't started reading it yet, but I admire your maturity in accepting criticism, author, I'm going to start reading because of that.
What does this have to do with anything? He gave a vague warning which is fine. He read it like I did he didn’t like it said why he didn’t so anyone else who has similar reading wants like him will like the comment and either not bother reading it or reading it to still give it a try. So what was the point of your comment I’m not trying to say it in a nasty way I’m genuinely curious if what you were trying to say just went over my head.
Syed_Azhaan:well i would say the author gave a fair warning with saying that this is not gonna be a common story that has already been said by saying that jon snow is not the original one