very poor ..mc is weak mentally ..very chaotic thought . complaining about one thing and when he gets it he cries...writer are you a kid because writing feels by an amateur .danzo control his life even when he is not there... author has no clue how to write fanfic...he doesn't trains but complains about being great... he can train sensor who will know but he gets panic attack... being a sensor he can sense root..
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