Review Detail of Frostbite007 in The Enlightened One (Senju!SI)

my guy, i already read this fic until the latest chapter (49), and i don't get the part of when MC act like Man-Child.. are we reading the same fic here?

Ignore people like this guy. He likely either misunderstood what I was trying to write, or is so deluded that he thought up his own reality of my story. Thanks for the defense though.

no problem~

ohh really ... then please explain why Naruto and sasuke are genderbent if not for your troupe??? MC is super paranoid of danzo but jumped at the chance to declare himself a senju as if he'll not be targetted by another villages or orochimaru?? or how he innately understands wood style???

haha

You do realize that this is a fanfic right that like saying don't change anything about the characters because they were made a certain way. it would be boring and uninteresting to watch about a SI inside Naruto with everything the same. would u like to read a Naruto fic the same as canon. Just enjoy the story and don't complain.

i like to read one in which MC is not obtusely moron

well if you like fics where the mc is not obtusely moron i recommend reading ' The Enlightened One ' by kakukami, it's pretty good.

I did indeed skip over that because his main problem was the genderbending but let talk about the other problems yes sometimes the mc act childish we can sum that up to children's hormones and stress and Danzo is a real threat u just never really see it because it never happened to Naruto, so we just gloss over it secondly he jumped at being the Senju because he was sure the Hokage could protect him from Danzo because he was a Senju and had mokuton secondly I'm making an example here he said how is he innately understanding wood style it legit in his blood that like asking how do he know how to breath if he never done it before also it like do something on mistake but u know u can do it again it something similar to that. he not wrong about be targeted by orochimaru or another village but have to understand Orochi waited till the forest of death arc for Sasuke he will have enough time to prepare might be able to even make a trap to hurt Orochi not 100% sure how he going to do that but he Definity can. does that sum everything up if it doesn't, please tell me what I missed.

You are right he does do dumb thing but that's because he was a normal human before all this, he wasn't some god in his past life where he was the strongest, smartest of any sort he was just a normal human thrusted into Naruto trying his best to survive if that didn't clear up anything please tell me what I missed.

normal humans with plot knowledge can't be this dumb....

You missed the part that he is a fan of Naruto and clearly knows everything, so it is his obligation to be careful with his speech and actions

Thanks for the heads up! It’s funny that every person arguing against you was actually making your point lol genderbendt Naruto and Sasuke is already a red flag so thanks for the heads up! Author is a tranny fan and nothing wrong with that but not for me