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Cruel_Death
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I'm pretty new to writing, so this book might not be perfect, but I'll give it my all to make it interesting and get better. I'll definitely need your help though. So, feel free to point out any mistakes and give me some tips btw!

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Marvel: At the start, I married Aunt May and activated the System

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ZeroJLK
ZeroJLKLv5ZeroJLK

why the name of character in chapter 1 all parker??

Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathAuthorCruel_Death

Two reasons: (1) First, I didn't remember their name while I was writing, and I was dumb enough not to search for it. (2) Second, I wanted to write about family stuff, like...Alabama-edition, but later realized it was a waste of time.

ZeroJLK:why the name of character in chapter 1 all parker??
rodrigo_herrera
rodrigo_herreraLv3rodrigo_herrera

esta novela es tuya o la estas traduciendo???

Cruel_Death:Two reasons: (1) First, I didn't remember their name while I was writing, and I was dumb enough not to search for it. (2) Second, I wanted to write about family stuff, like...Alabama-edition, but later realized it was a waste of time.
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rodrigo_herrera
rodrigo_herreraLv3rodrigo_herrera

alguien encontró esta novela en chino si la encontraste me podes decir como buscarlo porfa

Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathAuthorCruel_Death

rodrigo_herrera:alguien encontró esta novela en chino si la encontraste me podes decir como buscarlo porfa
WritingHermit
WritingHermitLv3WritingHermit

I really liked your other novel 'the greatest urban villain'. if you're translating it, please tell original name. if it's your own, please continue it please. writing quality is excellent and progression feels good too. so please continue.