Review Detail of Shibou_Kurai in A Mage in HXH.

The idea from the story is really good, but the Author rushed some parts or don't give a good reason, leaving a hole. I recommend re-edit the start from the story and start calm down. For example: On the second pre-test, have a button and need to press it to answer, and (I don't remember 100% if have in this story) have another person who answer the question first. If you want I can re-edit a little and send to you see what do you think. I hope you don't drop it.