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The_Rune_Raven
The_Rune_RavenLv411mth
2024-01-30 02:39

alright so i'm on the verge of saying this is a bad MTL, story seems good but i actually got a real headache from tying to decipher the first 3 chapters, if dude can translate better it would be great but it's like he translated from chinese to his own first language to english some of the stuff does not work

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SlimeQueen127
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AstralNinja420
AstralNinja420Lv14

Just go thru ight and remove everything Chinese plus use stuff and characters that are mainstream otherwise don’t use them because only tsunade and mc the rest I don’t so in conclusion get rid of Chinese stuff

11mth

Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

Reveal spoiler

11mth
SPHYN_X
SPHYN_XLv14

Didn’t even try. He just copy and pasted it!

11mth
mr_fool_lom
mr_fool_lomLv4

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EtherealStar
EtherealStarLv15

Quality is really bad. looks like an mlt or barely above in quality. Names and genders change regularly. sentences are structured like mlt, barely understandable or just un readable. The plot is basic for a Chinese ff in the MCU with chat group. In 18chapters, nothing much happended even if he already did a mission in the Naruto world. Dialogues are sometimes unreadable othe cryptic due to bad translation and the rest of the time when it's understandable it's just bad. can't say much about updating stability since i just read all chapters in one go. world background is not his just like most FF and we have too little info on it to see mutch of the OC content.

11mth
GreyKnights
GreyKnightsLv14

very bad MTL you will get a headache from reading this

11mth
SlimeQueen127
SlimeQueen127Author

well I saw your comment and reviews so I try improving myself so check it out when ever you saw a mistake try helping me by pointing it out.Love ❤ you

11mth
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