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Jenishh
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2024-09-20 11:14

i like the story the character development is slow and nice not like other similar novel...

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ChiefGamer
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Reviewed After Finishing Novel (Through M,t,l) (Total Chaps 1328) -just like many others I started this book for the f,a,s,t. p,a,s,t . I fell in love with it. so much that i decided to read the entirety of it through m,t,l. this is only the second novel I have read through m,t,l since it's quite hard to read m,t,l. after finishing i just want to say that I would have preferred not reading it through m,t,l. it's not that good. in fact objectively it's bad.first things first this novel should not be named full time artist. more like - full time musician, part time novelist and other arts hobbyist. this novel focuses 70 percent on music, 25 on literature, 4 painting (including comics, cartoons and animations), 0.5 games, 0.5 percent dance. in fact the author himself said the main focus was music in the afterword. I would have liked it if he said so in the synopsis. the first 150 chaps are good then the author introduces a new setting that forms the basis of the rest of the novel he starts focusing more on the reactions of people rather than the mc. it starts going downhill from there. i liked in the beginning that this novel focused more on mc and less on reactions of people. yet after chap 150ish it focuses 60-70 percent on reactions which is much more than I'd like. also the author is very poor at planning things. he focuses too much on a single arc and forgets everything that should be going on concurrently with it. not only that he jumps around dates too much. despite the fact that each month is very important in this novel. he also forgets many plot points. the worst thing is that in the first 150 chaps there were many good characters built by the author. it felt like he could have a novel with mc and meaningful side characters. but that too is just thrown out of the window. after that the characters only appear when they are needed and then too briefly with barely any focus on them. it's mostly the mc and the reactions of everyone else that is focused on throughout the novel. 60-70 percent reactions, 25-35 MC, 5 percent everyone else.the world background is the only thing that's good. but I don't feel like elaborating on it much since i am too tired to write anymore finally the only good thing that came out of reading this was that i listened to many eastern songs, classical music including symphonies, read quite a few short stories and got to know a few interesting novels that i would probably not read.

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