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Akatsuki07
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2024-03-12 01:51

So heres my honest review. Writing quality : 5/5 The writing style is simple enough to understand.Compare to mtl, a few small mistake is acceptable for me.So i give it 5/5. Updating stability : 5/5 As long as you can keep the update going then im fine with it. Story development : 3/5 Its your average transmigation novel that has been overused.No major mistake as of yet.But the only problem i have is that the story lack flavour.Theres nothing wrong with the story but theres also nothing new with it.Can be said to be predicatable. Character design : 3/5 Same with story development, every character in the story can be found in any other novel.Probably because theres not a lot of chapter.But im afraid that the MC wont get any major character development within a couple hundreds chapter.Side character would get a few of it but hopefully it will be memorable enough to stick in the head. World background : 3/5 Not a lot of info has been given as the novel is new.But i do like the way you give a little bit of info here and there about the academy.Unfortunately no info about the whole country, kingdom or empire.Can be resolves with more chapter. To conclude, the novel is good enough for you to pass the time and forget about it afterward.Just another average novel per say.

Fake Professor, Misunderstood As Strong

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Okojus
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hi if you have the time I would love such a detailed review for my novel Calamity Upon This World

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YAMDAAA
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just looked at all your comments and gotta tell you, you're the MVP of this whole app

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The shameless author gives his novel 5 stars as a lucky charm! This is my second novel, but I will put my best efforts into it. Thanks for all of your support.

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kylo_stekreo
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having read the author's previous work i already expected this novel to be of nice quality but even then it still amazed me as it only got me to want to read more of it. Anyway the story is just starting but it looks promising enough for a five star review from now which speaks volumes of the author's capability

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Paradox_Crystal
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i have been reading this author's works for a long while now. Just like his other works, this one is also guaranteed to be good. I definitely recommend reading it.

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Fallen_Angel_26
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I've been reading this novel from the start and I'm liking it so far.I also read your other novel so I have high hopes for it. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will make this dark novel 😁

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Kroxius
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I have read the author's other book and so far this book also. It's a good work, giving a 5 star because I believe it won't disappoint me. The novel is going to be dark and since I love villainous novels but with most of them turning to anti-hero, I have low expectations but I hope it doesn't disappoints at least and keep going.

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I love High profile MC I love MC that is misunderstood as strong I love almost everyone look up to MC

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CephalonCoda
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The story itself is interesting but the author has an extremely long authors note at the end of EVERY chapter that increases the costs of coins per chap. I was hoping that author would cut it out once he started charging at chapter 30 but unfortunately that isnt the case. Cant overlook it, sorry. Will be dropping at chapter 35.

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Reveal spoiler

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