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Akatsuki07
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2024-03-12 01:51

So heres my honest review. Writing quality : 5/5 The writing style is simple enough to understand.Compare to mtl, a few small mistake is acceptable for me.So i give it 5/5. Updating stability : 5/5 As long as you can keep the update going then im fine with it. Story development : 3/5 Its your average transmigation novel that has been overused.No major mistake as of yet.But the only problem i have is that the story lack flavour.Theres nothing wrong with the story but theres also nothing new with it.Can be said to be predicatable. Character design : 3/5 Same with story development, every character in the story can be found in any other novel.Probably because theres not a lot of chapter.But im afraid that the MC wont get any major character development within a couple hundreds chapter.Side character would get a few of it but hopefully it will be memorable enough to stick in the head. World background : 3/5 Not a lot of info has been given as the novel is new.But i do like the way you give a little bit of info here and there about the academy.Unfortunately no info about the whole country, kingdom or empire.Can be resolves with more chapter. To conclude, the novel is good enough for you to pass the time and forget about it afterward.Just another average novel per say.

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Okojus
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hi if you have the time I would love such a detailed review for my novel Calamity Upon This World

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