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Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv141yr
2024-02-04 22:07

The novel is pretty good. We currently barely know anything about the Mc at the moment, but I hope that we will start learning more about him soon. The writing is good except that the author, for some reason, mixes she and he while writing. There hasn't been much world building beyond a basic description of the world. But I still enjoy the novel, and I look forward to seeing how the Mc's and Evelyns relationship will develop.

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Attacker
AttackerLv15

the she and he mixing is probably because he’s using a translator or something

Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv14

Yeah, the author is from Indonesia, so it's highly likely that that's the case. I just think that it shouldn't be too hard to fix it.

Attacker:the she and he mixing is probably because he’s using a translator or something
DaoistMxv6sI
DaoistMxv6sILv3

why was this stoped

Lazy_Chicken_God:Yeah, the author is from Indonesia, so it's highly likely that that's the case. I just think that it shouldn't be too hard to fix it.
Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv14

idk, the author is still active writing another novel, so try to ask him directly

DaoistMxv6sI:why was this stoped
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