Review Detail of _DEKIM_ in PJO: Son of a Primordial

Item: PJO: Son of a Primordial
Rating: 2

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_DEKIM_Lv13mth_DEKIM_

In my opinion. Bad.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

PJO: Son of a Primordial

Joanjudo

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JoanjudoAuthorJoanjudo

May I ask why so I know what to improve upon

3mth

RangoThePrudeLv4RangoThePrude

I read it and personally the writing isn’t all that great, idk if it improved but the beginning chapters sorta turned me off to the story due to the writing

Joanjudo:May I ask why so I know what to improve upon
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2mth

JoanjudoAuthorJoanjudo

I think I do improve in the later chapters but thx for the feedback

RangoThePrude:I read it and personally the writing isn’t all that great, idk if it improved but the beginning chapters sorta turned me off to the story due to the writing

2mth